01 April 2010

oh what bison dripping wet
two and two
in red and blue and green
 
actuarial flow ers
in my b's
 
pulléd ringing
eternal
of boysgirls and
 
a multitude they seem'd

2 comments:

olyphant said...

Echoes of Williams, O'Hara, and cummings here. Very cool. Have you read Tristan Tzara? The short, language-focused lines and emphasis on color remind me of his poems.

Ian Keenan said...

Big Tzara enthusiast, thanks.. his birthday is on the 16th; earlier Tzara pastiche:

http://ianckeenan.blogspot.com/2007/04/sixteen.html

whenever you or a friend is Paris bound, Montparnasse Cemetary with a cloth to keep his marble slab clean!